Sci-Fi Short Film: AUTONOMOUS - DUST
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Date: 2024-04-01
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Comments and reviews: 35
snowmech3430
This was pretty good, however, the ending is a bit convoluted. The sudden appearance of that hologram seems very out of place, as well as, why would it stop or cause the traffickers to swerve It was clearly a hologram, so anyone would just go through it. If it was not clearly a hologram, why would the cyclists not dodge it like they did everything else, especially considering the slower speeds they were going. Writing and storytelling can be hard, especially when the writer needs that hook to create their ending. Despite the ending, I think this was done very well.
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This was pretty good, however, the ending is a bit convoluted. The sudden appearance of that hologram seems very out of place, as well as, why would it stop or cause the traffickers to swerve It was clearly a hologram, so anyone would just go through it. If it was not clearly a hologram, why would the cyclists not dodge it like they did everything else, especially considering the slower speeds they were going. Writing and storytelling can be hard, especially when the writer needs that hook to create their ending. Despite the ending, I think this was done very well.
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Servinghimalwyz
It is too much like a bad intro to a video game. You cannot invest in the characters or story. The characters are bland, despite heavy-handed attempts to personalize them. The lighting is too dark to follow much detail. The scenes are sterile, lacking warmth and failing to draw in the viewer. The dialogue is vague and distant. I think there is a good idea buried somewhere in there, but the end result leaves me thankful the run time is only four and a half minutes. My two cents worth: try again.
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It is too much like a bad intro to a video game. You cannot invest in the characters or story. The characters are bland, despite heavy-handed attempts to personalize them. The lighting is too dark to follow much detail. The scenes are sterile, lacking warmth and failing to draw in the viewer. The dialogue is vague and distant. I think there is a good idea buried somewhere in there, but the end result leaves me thankful the run time is only four and a half minutes. My two cents worth: try again.
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ausfoodgarden
Ok, Take my money! Who are SPRAWL and why is that package so important.
I most definitely would like to see a movie based on this (or maybe a game)
And love the going analog and off-grid mentions.
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Ok, Take my money! Who are SPRAWL and why is that package so important.
I most definitely would like to see a movie based on this (or maybe a game)
And love the going analog and off-grid mentions.
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oldbloke135
I like the idea that, when we are all riding around in autonomous vehicles, the police will be able to commandeer them to block the roads. This will all be coming very soon, certainly within ten years.
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I like the idea that, when we are all riding around in autonomous vehicles, the police will be able to commandeer them to block the roads. This will all be coming very soon, certainly within ten years.
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AlokKumar-tk1ty
Hey DUST
Just sayin
That if u will give a little more clarity in understanding the overall thing and uplaod one video in a month then it can get millions of views
Great works
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Hey DUST
Just sayin
That if u will give a little more clarity in understanding the overall thing and uplaod one video in a month then it can get millions of views
Great works
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demolition3612
Was that a robocop reference where the detective at the end is owned by a robotic corporation, and they are going to take the biker girl in too to become another detective
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Was that a robocop reference where the detective at the end is owned by a robotic corporation, and they are going to take the biker girl in too to become another detective
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wrench9042
Every Single Time you are so close to victory, something bad happens. EVERY TIME! Here's a tip. When ever you are so close to victory, always expect the unexpected.
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Every Single Time you are so close to victory, something bad happens. EVERY TIME! Here's a tip. When ever you are so close to victory, always expect the unexpected.
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drewrub7415
Gotta admin, in a short amount of time you have me VERY curious about this world and what the package was. And who SPRAWL is. And why we should dislike them.
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Gotta admin, in a short amount of time you have me VERY curious about this world and what the package was. And who SPRAWL is. And why we should dislike them.
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dwpix
The dialogue was clumsy.
I have never personally produced anything, but I do seem to have an appreciation for good work and know what it looks like.
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The dialogue was clumsy.
I have never personally produced anything, but I do seem to have an appreciation for good work and know what it looks like.
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FalloutConspiracy
That was some good cyberpunk! I really liked the animated visuals on this one. Short and sweet with a heavy dose of dystopianism. Bravo!
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That was some good cyberpunk! I really liked the animated visuals on this one. Short and sweet with a heavy dose of dystopianism. Bravo!
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ImpossibleObjects
Hey all! This is Joe Sill, the director here. Thanks for taking time to watch AUTONOMOUS. Matisse and I are excited to talk to you guys!
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Hey all! This is Joe Sill, the director here. Thanks for taking time to watch AUTONOMOUS. Matisse and I are excited to talk to you guys!
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matycee
this particular short can be qualified as a platypus, a being that both is a mammal AND lays eggs. crazy right that's this short.
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this particular short can be qualified as a platypus, a being that both is a mammal AND lays eggs. crazy right that's this short.
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uwillnevahno6837
FYI the authorities getting tech to stop/move our vehicles for public safety and protection is in fact on the horizon.
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FYI the authorities getting tech to stop/move our vehicles for public safety and protection is in fact on the horizon.
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nilsnyman6767
1: 55 when the biker turns around so do the cops to give chase but traffic is flowing WITH them instead of against them.
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1: 55 when the biker turns around so do the cops to give chase but traffic is flowing WITH them instead of against them.
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dust
This was awesome! Btw my last name IS sproule! Or were they saying sprawl Either way sounds the same and I was like whaaa lol
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This was awesome! Btw my last name IS sproule! Or were they saying sprawl Either way sounds the same and I was like whaaa lol
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jamiesmith4149
Wow great short film. I love the music well mixed into film. Adds to the great feel to the atmosphere of the film.
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Wow great short film. I love the music well mixed into film. Adds to the great feel to the atmosphere of the film.
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FrancoFACT
Excellent concept, simple but concise, focused on the plot and using the sci-fi without overwhelming, as it should be.
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Excellent concept, simple but concise, focused on the plot and using the sci-fi without overwhelming, as it should be.
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jennygibbons1258
That was truly excellent and I wanted to see where it could go from there. Intriguing and Tron-like. Thanks
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That was truly excellent and I wanted to see where it could go from there. Intriguing and Tron-like. Thanks
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ziguirayou
You know why the film grain feels artificial Because the grain is more visible in light areas then dark ones.
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You know why the film grain feels artificial Because the grain is more visible in light areas then dark ones.
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charlespham7648
Where is the swarm of drones to take out the bikes This is supposed to be the future right
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Where is the swarm of drones to take out the bikes This is supposed to be the future right
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dust
Yeah the audio mixing - the transitions between each voice line - was kind of jumbled and rushed
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Yeah the audio mixing - the transitions between each voice line - was kind of jumbled and rushed
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wakeup1507
Really liked this great graphics, reminded me a bit of Tron. Left me wanting to see more.
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Really liked this great graphics, reminded me a bit of Tron. Left me wanting to see more.
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Jason-zg3nl
I have to say that was one of the best movie clip! Would love to see more like that!
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I have to say that was one of the best movie clip! Would love to see more like that!
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kennethwalton6
Please write a show for Netflix, they seem to be getting everything wrong lately
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Please write a show for Netflix, they seem to be getting everything wrong lately
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